Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Countdown to Blast Off!


Due dates approaching:
Thursday, April 23 =   4th genre packet due -  no computers                                                                                                    *Bring project to class to revise by hand.
                                     
Monday, April 27 =     Work on revision for total project - no computers
                                    *Bring project to class to revise by hand.
                                     
Wednesday, April 29=  Computers available for revising and printing.
                                      Projects due at end of class period.
                                                                                                                                                   
Tuesday, May 5   =       Senior final presentations!
                                     
Thursday, May 7 =       Blast Off! Graduation!

Sunday, April 19, 2015

Surprise...Not for the Faint of Heart!

Consider this news:

Not as startling as the clown's appearance in Stephen King's It...
sharks animated GIF
or as unsettling as the shark attack in Jaws...
disney animated GIF
and though you may not be dancing in the aisles...



I'm back!  Really!

I'm anxious to see you and to return to room 185 tomorrow.  It seems almost surreal because it has been so long.  Thank goodness for Ms. Reaves and for her willingness to conference via phone with me and for her many trips to my house with your papers and our plans!

I understand your latest challenge is finding access to computers during class, at least until a week from Wednesday.  For that reason, you will need to type or process your fourth genre at home or at the library on your own time.  This means you need to bring your drafts with you to class Tuesday (either printed or written out) so that we can conference.  The final package (4th genre lst and 2nd drafts with conferencing notes. revisions, and reader's notes) is due this Thursday!  

Good luck!  Until I see you Tuesday, adieu!



Wednesday, April 1, 2015

DO OR DO NOT. THERE IS NO TRY.

Greetings. In case you missed it, the title of our blog post today comes from Yoda, whose infallible advice will help you get through this project.

Here's what's happening today and this coming week, so pay attention.

1. Genre #2 (in case you still haven't turned it in) can be turned in today for full credit. Today meaning 4/2/15 and not any other day. If you have issues, talk to me.

2. We will begin working on Genre #3 today, draft and conference next Monday and Wednesday (4/6 and 4/8) and turn in the final draft packets on Friday (4/10) at the end of the hour.

3. HOWEVER, if you get done beforehand, props to you. You can always start on Genre #4 and get ahead on revisions, which will be a big part of your final project grade.

4. Genre #4 will be due Thursday, April 16th...so it's probably best to get ideas for all genres now. Because of the time crunch and also so you will have time for revisions, you may need to work on these OUTSIDE of class.

5. You can always visit during Endeavor. The final project is worth 350 points, which includes the research paper, Genres 2-4, and a short presentation. It could make or break your grade, so put into it the effort you think will get you the grade you need.

Comprende?

Let's get to work.

P.S. If you read this post, write down the title on a sheet of paper and turn it into the basket. We Star Wars fans (or avid readers of this very interesting blog...) must stick together.

Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Your Final: The Multi-Genre Research Project

Greetings, 6th block!

As you draft, conference, and revise your second genre, it is important to keep in mind the entire research project. How do the pieces fit together? Are they logical? Creative? Do they provide multiple perspectives to your topic or issue? Do you think your readers will gain new information based on your project? Is your effort obvious?

In class today you will receive a rough idea of what is expected of your final project for this class, which will also act as your final. It's worth a pretty impressive amount of points, so it would do to be present in class and complete your work, regardless of school-related absences.

Because graduation is approaching, this project may be kicked into high gear. Our tentative schedule looks a bit like this...
This week (March 23-27): Genre Two.  
Next week (March 30-April 3): Genre Three.  
The week after next (April 6-10): Genre Four.
And then? Revision!!

Your genres should add to the quality and interest level of your topic. Please read the comments on the grading rubric that you have been given and take the comments made on your research and genres in account when you revise.

A SHORT PRESENTATION will be required at the end of the revisionary period, but you can handle it.

Be calm. Breathe. You graduate soon. We wouldn't want you to hyperventilate about such a simple matter as Grammar and Composition. ;)

Best of luck!!

Friday, March 20, 2015

Pick a genre, any genre!

Today, you will pick your second genre (your first was your research paper) to begin further exploration of your topic. Wednesday, we spent the block writing and picking possible genres for the project. Some of you may have discovered some genres that you would like to use and expand upon, while others may have simply eliminated certain possibilities from the list.

We will begin your first drafts today. Because of our schedule next week, your first drafts of this particular genre are due Monday, March 23rd. We will conference that day. The final draft of your second genre will be due Friday, March 27th by the end of the hour.

Also note that a "Reader's Note" MUST be included for each genre that you complete. This is simply a paragraph or two of explanation of your choice of genre, the perspective that you have chosen to explore using the genre, and how the particular genre fits the topic that you have chosen.

Each day, we will freewrite for the first 10 minutes or so using a new genre so that you may constantly be thinking of ideas for your projects. Remember that your goal is to represent your chosen topic in as many forms and perspectives as possible.

So, pick a genre, any genre! Enjoy this freedom to write and create in ways that will challenge and interest you. Party on.

P.S. The absolute last day to turn in your research paper packet (see prior blog posts about requirements) is the end of the day Monday. If you experienced circumstances which prevented you from turning in your paper, talk to me.

Tuesday, March 17, 2015

Fourth Quarter Begins...

Here's a riddle:  what's blonde but evenly balanced, two-footed, one-armed, and usually a part of our class?  Another hint:  she's disappointed that her physical therapy keeps her from returning till next Wednesday.  Yay for Ms. Reaves!

Stay tuned and bring your favorite writing utensil to each class.  We'll be exploring writing workshop and providing opportunities to practice your craft.

For a bonus, put the answer to today's riddle on a piece of paper and hand it to Ms. Reaves before the bell rings.

P.S. Please keep this to yourself. These bonus points should be reserved for blog readers only. Congratulations for reading the blog!

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

The Final Stretch


What's life without a Star Wars reference? ;)
Here's what the next few days should have looked like, prior to our "snow" day:

Wednesday: our last official conference block. Share your paper with AS MANY PEOPLE as possible. 

Multiple perspectives are key when writing and drafting a research paper. Make sure to look at the guiding questions that have been posted on the board. These will help you make constructive and HELPFUL comments to your classmates. 



Comments that merely correct grammar or only compliment a paper are not very useful.

Friday: final project is due by the end of the day. The packet should include
  • Significantly different drafts (at least two)
  • Correctly formatted works cited page (last page of paper)
  • Evidence of conferencing (at least three people)
  • Revised annotated bibliography (see handout)
  • Letter of reflection about process, change of topics, ideas about other multigenre writings, etc. 
The snow day did not affect our schedule, so your papers should be ready to turn in by the end of the hour today. IF YOU NEED MORE TIME, keep in mind that you did have all day yesterday, time in Endeavor if you wanted it, and many, many days spent in class. Feel free to use Spring Break to work on it, but points will be deducted from the total process grade for the final packet.

Good luck!

Monday, March 2, 2015

The Secret to Your Heart's Desire...(not really)

The Online Writing Lab (OWL) at Purdue University is one of the most useful sources when writing a research paper. Since a research paper is the first writing component of your multigenre project, you might want to take a look.

I've divided up the links here as to what kind of help you may need.

1. In-text Citations: These are references to the works cited page, which will be included as the last page of your research paper. Anytime you quote, paraphrase, or use any information that you did not know prior to your research, give credit to the original source.

2. Formatting Quotations: You need to include quotations in your research paper. Remember that you are giving credit where credit is due, while also writing your own take on the research based on your findings and even your personal opinion. Using quotes is great; however, they can easily take over your paper if you let them.

3. Works Cited Page: This page acts as the last page of your research paper. Basically, it is an alphabetical list of all the sources that you used to write the paper. Any information that you use outside of your own personal knowledge should be represented here.

That was a lot of information. Now, read this to make yourself feel better:

Writing a research paper is tough business. You have to find a topic, narrow or broaden it depending on the length requirement, find sources that support your topic, and write a paper that is both interesting, informative, and credible. That's a lot of responsibility.

Effort in this venture is key. Attempt to follow quotation directions. List the sources to the best of your ability on the works cited page. Remember all the MLA guidelines that we have practiced. Lastly, don't fret too much about the in-text citations. This will take practice.

I believe in you. 

Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Writer's Block Blues...

Here's my best shot at a one-handed pep talk!  I have corresponded with a few of you about how and where to search for sources and even how  to find a point or direction in your search.  Take heart!  Don't give up!  Attitude is crucial to success!

First, remember that before you can begin drafting, you have to do a lot of reading.  That's what researching is all about:  searching, reading, searching again and more reading, and so on.  It isn't until I begin to dig into a topic that I know which of my books and articles are useful.   Don't forget you can also use other kinds of sources, like film, interviews, and more.

Don't cut this part (reading and searching) short so you can begin writing the paper.  Knowing how to efficiently search is a talent that you'll use in the future.  Some of you who are having trouble finding sources will benefit by playing with the words you type in the search bar, both on Google and our databases.   Remember the tips our librarians gave us about making advanced searches, and also their presentation about how to "Search Like a Boss" on Google, if you use that site.  Sometimes it takes a lot of patience and perseverance.

That said, please give Ms. Reaves a warm welcome.  This portion of the project is her forte!  We will be in close communication to serve you our very best!  You've had quite a bit of class time to work on this project, but it takes discipline to stay on task.  This also takes time outside of class.  I am hoping that with a quiet, diligent group of students in class, you can draft and conference and revise and so forth.   I hope in the next three classes before spring break, you can finish up your research papers.  Won't that be something to celebrate?

Thursday, February 19, 2015

Guidelines for Research Paper, Due Dates, and a Bit of Regrouping! Teamwork!

I hope this post and the post before this help clear up concerns you may have about grades and due dates for our upcoming project.   Because some of you have missed class due to activities that have caused your absence from class, and because of snow days and my absence,  the first area of concern is due dates.  I hope this helps, but I'm extending due dates for the annotated bibliography. 

I'll give bonus points to those of you who moved heaven and earth to hand in your annotated bibliography on time, and I'll accept and grade bibliographies next week in an effort to provide enough time for reading.  I'll ask the substitute to mark those that were turned in this week.  You'll need to hand in bibliographies before the next due date, which is the first draft of your research paper due Thursday, February 26th.



Guidelines for the research paper:
  • 4 to 5 pages MLA format
  • Minimum of three sources used with at least one citation for each of your three sources. This could be a paraphrase or direct quote for each.  Aim for a minimum of one direct quote.  You will no doubt use more.  Remember, you will write other pieces which can be informed by your other sources.  Your minimum is five sources for the whole project. 
  • Paper to include an introduction, supporting body, and conclusion.
  • First draft conference on Thursday, February 26th.  Must be a complete paper, although it will be rough.
  • Second draft conference on Monday, March 2.  This draft should include your citations.
  • Third draft final packet due Wednesday, March 4.
Because I've been grounded until the cast comes off (right after spring break), I've been worrying about how to help you with the writing.  Great news:  Ms. Reaves has agreed to come back on Wednesday, February 25th until my return, and she is looking forward to working on this project with you! 

Have fun researching, my friends!

An Update From Home...Miss You!


Nothing like a snow day or two!  Congratulations, seniors, on shortening your semester!  As for me, I'm "on the mend" and working with the one-handed, hunt-and-peck system on the keyboard.  You don't want to hear about my silly accident, but it's enough to know that I broke several bones in my left arm/wrist/hand and am grounded now!


Olaf needs an arm,too!
What's due, you ask?  You've missed a class period, so I hope you have found and summarized your sources for your research. Your annotated bibliographies are due at the end of class today. You should be able to trade and conference your work today. Refer to the Purdue Owl for directions to the annotated bibliography. Remember we wrote annotated bibliographies first semester, so you also should still have those directions and samples!
This picture is for you, Noah!

Hand in your work at the end of class.  Let me hear from you if you have a problem.  You know you can use the comment box here, and that way maybe someone else from class can help you, too.

You can use class time to work on your first draft of your research paper.  Bring your printed articles or books or flash drives to class so you can get credit for your efforts during class. First draft conferences of the research paper will be next Thursday.  Come prepared. A completed first draft is a complete paper, not a one-page brief attempt!

Sorry I'm not there.  Let me hear from you if you have questions.


Friday, February 6, 2015

A Note About the Research...

It's Friday, and many of you are checking out books related to your research topics.  I hope this trip to the library helps you make the connection between research and fun!  Yes, it can be fun... Think about the number of times a day you make a quick check online for information on a myriad of topics.  I do. What I'm hoping for is that the topic you choose leads you to riveting reading, reading that you really want to do.

Next week's classes are devoted to reading workshop.  Bring your research materials with you to class.  If you have a topic the school system will be likely to block because of content, print it out at home or bring it on a flash drive to print for class.  Come prepared!  You'll get workshop participation points just for coming in prepared and working, reading, and writing quietly, making notes for your project.

The first due date is Feb 11th for the annotated bibliography writing conference.  The final draft of the annotated bib will be due on February18th.  You'll remember you wrote an annotated bib first semester.   You will briefly summarize your sources, how they fit your topic and how you will use the information.   You will place your sources in alphabetical order according to the first word in the citation.

So happy reading!  Stay focused.  Consider this to be homework.  There's no way you can accomplish all of our goals by counting on class time only to complete the assignments.

Wednesday, February 4, 2015

Panning for Ideas, Finding Sources, and Narrowing the Topic...


We have some very interesting reading to do in the next few weeks.  It'll be a joy to see what comes of your topics; there is such a wide variety.  We cover everything from the animals and entertainment to closed adoptions, from gender equality to poverty and education, and from atrocities of the Holocaust to Disney princesses. Gosh, the list goes on, and I'm so pleased to think these are topics you want to learn more about.

I realize that requiring a primary source seems to baffle some of you, but I don't want that to keep you from the topic you would most like to learn about.  With your list of topics, I began to explore book titles, and I've asked the librarians for help.  Wouldn't it be more interesting to start off with a book, fiction or non-fiction, related to your topic?  For example, A Long Way Gone:  Memoirs of a Boy Soldier, would be an interesting place to start for the topic of boys in war.  For poverty and/or education, I am Malala may illuminate the importance of equal access to education.  We (librarians and I)  are compiling a list of books and ideas.

In the meantime, we will return to grammar today with a study of the comma and also parallel structure.  Friday your 2nd writer's notebooks are due.  In an effort to continue the idea of choice, I am offering the choice of a writer's notebook installment of 8 pages (or 4 front and back) or a reading response on a book of your choice.  By the time we get to next Friday (February 13th ), I hope you'll have a book related to your research topic that you could use for a book response.  At least we can try.  At any rate, your reading will no doubt be related to your research topic!

Meantime, happy reading, writing, and researching!


Sunday, February 1, 2015

MULTI-GENRE RESEARCH PAPER


            Monday's class will be devoted to the project proposals.  Your task will be to read each project proposal and make thoughtful, helpful comments.  Ask questions if you need further explanation.  Make suggestions for sources and share any connections you have.

           This project provides a chance to pursue a passion in your intellectual/emotional/spiritual life, a chance to strive to answer a question involving a topic of consuming interest to you and to communicate your learning through a multi-genre research project, where you get at the factual, the emotional, and the imaginative.  
            
            Choose a person, idea, topic, trend, era, cultural phenomenon, movement, thing, place . . . and become the quintessential mad researcher!

Required Research Sources Of Your Inquiry:
·        At least one book (or two, or three. Read fast, become an expert)
·        Articles
·        Primary material:  interviews, testimony, observations
·        Internet sources*


*The Internet contains the good and the bad, so be careful.  We have wonderful databases available; there are also shallow, misleading websites. Evaluate the quality and the depth of what you find.  You can't simply paste material from a website into your paper.  This is a chance to challenge yourself, to stretch and refine your writing skills and powers of communication.
Pieces your multi-genre project must contain:
·        Brief informational research essay, four to five pages.  Make this vivid, informational, straight-ahead writing.  Boil your topic down to essentials.   
·        Preface/Introduction/Dear Reader
·        A visual element/the arts
·        Works Cited
·        Note Page
·        Unifying elements 

            Include in your paper all six bulleted items. But you’ll need to write more genres than these to create a fully realized mgp.  Wherever else you go in the writing is up to you. Range as widely as you want in creating this paper. 
            Begin your research soon, make it part of your academic life, take notes and gather bibliographic information.  

Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Multi-Genre Projects - One More Idea Before We Begin!






What's the purpose in the last few blog assignments?  I hope you find topic ideas for your research project.  Up to this point, we have looked at videos and articles about service projects that give back to the community (Do Something that Matters) , be it global, national, or local.  We have perused the United Nations goals, looking for an area you may feel passionate about.  Our last post focused on sample projects from two college classrooms. Those projects focused on literature and connections to the world.  They also focused on action research, and they even included more straight-forward themes (alcoholism, eating disorders, and more). Some were no doubt more powerful than others, some more professional than others, but the purpose in this was to help you find a topic or area you'd like to research. 

Even if you think you already know what you'd like to research, you are still asked to keep an open mind on this journey.  What I ask you is challenging.  You are finding your own research topic, and you are designing your own project (while fulfilling the general requirements stated in the project outline).  Don't bore yourself with what you already know.  Don't fall back on the familiar because it feels safe.  This is a quest for the unknown, the fascinating, the riveting!  

You will be using some of our class time to find and read sources, so you will need to plan on using class time for this project.  That means you need to bring your articles and books and notes with you to class. The great news is that you will earn participation points for staying quietly on task during our class.  If the laptops deter you from getting your work done during class, plan on researching the old fashioned way:  paper, pencil, printed out articles, magazines or books. 

Today in class we will peruse one more category of research:  family history.  We will view Faces of America together as a class, and we will discuss ways this could become your research project.  This is linked on our home page. 

Just so you know, your research will spring from both primary and secondary sources!
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 Multi-Genre Research Proposal – due beginning of class on 2/2
For your Multi-genre research,  you will submit a proposal  blog post comprised of one descriptive paragraph.
A Descriptive Paragraph
In the paragraph briefly tell:
• Which type of project you are doing: Family, Neighborhood or Community, Career Interest, Cultural Interest.  What is your topic?
• The names and relationship to you of two or more people you can interview and the proposed dates when you will interview them over the next two weeks. Be sure that these dates fit with your work schedule.
• Describe what you already know about your topic.
*Tell what you want to learn about.
• Describe your plan for collecting information about your topic.  Include sources you already have and places you will look.
• Tell why you find this topic personally meaningful.

Monday, January 26, 2015

Tuesday's Class Work: Peruse Multi-Genre Projects

Our next creative project looms, and I hope you are thinking about an area of interest to research.  Choose a topic you really care about.  Be thinking about something that relates to your life, your family, your future, or the direction your life will take you.  I'll have some examples to share with you, but in the meantime you can be exploring your own ideas.

The cool thing about a multi-genre project is that it allows you to present your findings in many different ways, ways that may reflect a better understanding of your topic.  You may include a variety of texts, visual and print.  You may use music, art, video as well. 

Here is a link to an introduction to the Multi-Genre project created by a teacher at Colorado State University.  The opening quote justifies its importance:

"A multigenre paper arises from research, experience, and imagination. It is not an uninterrupted, expository monolog nor a seamless narrative nor a collection of poems. A multigenre paper is composed of many genres and subgenres, each piece self-contained, making a point of its own, yet connected by theme or topic and sometimes by language, images, and content. In addition to many genres, a multigenre paper may also contain many voices, not just the author's. The trick is to make such a paper hang together."
~~ (Romano, Blending Genre, Altering Style i-xi)
 Stay tuned.  We'll be sharing ideas first.  You'll have an opportunity to write proposals for this next adventure.http://writing.colostate.edu/gallery/multigenre/introduction.htm

Today's class should be devoted to pouring through the projects.  Go to the link listed on our home page for multi-genre projects and click on Tom Romano's menu where it lists "Multi-Genre papers."  There you will find even more project ideas.  Just so the rest of us can know, please create your own reflection post by telling us what you found interesting, why, and how that might lead you to your own project. What do you want to research?

Thursday, January 22, 2015

Kids Who Give Back - For Class on January 23rd

 I recently watched a fascinating edition of 60 Minutes ( a rerun)  which focused on Amazing Kids.  It was interesting and humbling to see how a 15 year-old boy developed a test for pancreatic cancer, although the jury is still out on its effectiveness. It also included another child who developed a philanthropic organization, a chess champion, and many others. Here's a link to the episode.  It's uplifting and serves as a reminder of the goodness of the human spirit. You do not have to blog about this part of today's post, but I believe you'll find the videos interesting and thought provoking!

We will be starting our next writing project soon, and I hope you will find a topic to consider for our next project.  You may find a passion in the United Nations Millennium Goals.  Read through them and consider where your passions are.  What do you see as the most urgent issues here at home?  What does ethical citizenship mean?    Be thinking about your passions and ready to decide what you would like research and learn more about (oops...ended in a preposition...).

Write a blog post today (or due before next class) about one of the millennium goals (choose one, any one) and explain or argue how this particular goal could also apply to our own neighborhoods or city.  Summarize the problem and suggested solutions.  Tell why you are interested (beyond the fact that I've asked you to read more deeply about one of the goals).  I wonder how this goal would be thought of by your Chinese correspondent.  You don't have to, but it would be interesting to ask about the issue you are interested in... (For example, how do they address the issue of hunger, or childhood diseases, etc...).  This post does not have to follow the traditional 40 point reading response, but should reflect reasonable thinking about the topic you choose.  You don't have to include a picture, but you can.  You may simply summarize in your own words or quote something interesting to analyze.  You are simply sharing what you find of interest and why!  20 points


Friday, January 16, 2015

Reading Response Redo: A One-Time Opportunity!

Here's the rule:  no late work!  For those of you off to a bad start with deadlines this semester, here is your once-in-a-class opportunity.  Read one of the following three articles, and respond in a blog post.  We will use the same reading response score sheet, so be sure you offer us a good summary of your article, an analysis of a quoted passage or passages, an explanation of your quotations, a connection to the rules, and an image.  Be careful!  Proofread!

Your choices are:  "A Word, Please:  Better grammar means better jobs" 
                              "A Word, Please: Grammar cop makes a copular mistake" or
                              "A Word, Please: Why punctuation, grammar are important."

Good luck!  These are due before class on Wednesday, January 21st!  (No school on Monday!)

Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Start Something That Matters: Reading Response #2

Below you will find links for your second reading response.  As spelled out in our "Welcome 2015" post, reading responses are due at the beginning of the following class period unless otherwise noted. This means your second response is due this coming Friday before class!  I think you'll find this fun, though.  The projects are interesting, and the idea is to find YOUR own passion.

You may have already heard of the entrepreneur Blake Mycoskie, author of Start Something that Matters. This book is a compelling autobiographical account of Mycoskie's life and what led him to find his passion, the creation of TOMS.  His advice provides us direction and a place to go following our autobiographies:

            Almost everyone has a passion for something, but sometimes we have trouble saying
         what it is.  It's surprisingly easy to lose touch with our true passions--sometimes because
         we get distracted with everyday living; sometimes simply because in the usual stream of
         talk or transactable business, no one ever asks us about our dreams.  That's why it's so
         important that you first find a way to articulate your passion  to yourself.  When you
         discover what your passion is, you will have found your story as well.

         If you're not sure about your passion, here are three questions I sometimes ask people:
  • If you did not have to worry about money, what would you do with your time?
  • What kind of work would you want to do?
  • What cause would you serve? (36).

1.  Visit Mycoskie's website and read/listen to stories of winners of the Do Good fund.
2.   Please post and analyze your favorite stories and provide us a link.  Tell
      why each winner is unique and clever. (Minimum 3.  Sky's the limit!)
3.   How are you connected or interested in the winners you choose to discuss?  (Not simply they               were the next on the list...How did this story catch your attention?)

4.  Think about Mycoskie's questions about your passions and include your answers in your
post.  You will be asked to pursue this in your next project.  Time to start thinking about yourself!

Feel lost?  You are not alone!  Time to start mapping your journey!.


Monday, January 12, 2015

Greetings from Ms. Reaves!

Hello 6th block. I'm writing you from my apartment, having just sat down after spending a long and tireless day at Spokane High School. If you can't tell, they haven't grown on me as much as you have. ;)

So, about your letters. Yes, they've been written, but I've been a bit busy since I left. You'll be getting them back this week (fingers crossed!!), if you want them, and if not, well then at least I was able to practice my typing skills.

I miss you all. The past month have been incredibly strange for me for multiple reasons, graduation and a new job being two, but the third is that I miss Parkview. It was my home for (nearly) four months and to think of my life outside of the four walls of this classroom is difficult. I hope that you know that it's not difficult because of the school or the room itself, but because of you. In your very own ways, you have given me an experience I will never forget. Helping you in Grammar and Comp. has been the greatest honor and I hope that you all respect yourselves enough to know that you are capable of great things. I have seen it in this classroom, and I know that you will continue to do so with Ms. James

Over the past few months, I have come to know Ms. James very well. To be frank, I love her and so should you. She often says that she and I are kindred spirits and I couldn't agree more. My placement at Parkview was entirely serendipitous (look it up!). Out of all the English classrooms in Springfield, I was given to her. Though I did not teach entirely in your class due to the nature of a dual-credit course, I hope that each and every one of you has learned something about yourself this semester. We've built ourselves a little community and it would be a shame to waste it. :)

Notice Doug and Kenneth...I'm not sure this picture could have
been taken any other way.
There are too many stories to tell about the time I have spent with you this semester, but suffice it to say that I will remember them all. Nearly everyone was in class when we took our class photo (left), which makes me happy. However, one good photo doesn't mean that we won't take another. I plan on returning to check in on you, so be sure that you keep yourselves looking fabulous! Picture-taking is a valuable skill, as represented in the fabricated term "selfie." We are a class that values technology, are we not?

I hope that you all had a wonderful Christmas break. If you have not written me a letter and still wish to do so, Ms. James knows where to find me. I will write one back to you, as I did with other students.

For those of you who did write, thank you. Your letters brought me to tears and made me seriously contemplate staying forever without pay. I will cherish them always.

And for now, goodbye. Or, let's settle on see you soon. Goodbye is too final a word. :)

Grammar Bytes and Reading Response #1

I hope you are enjoying the grammar review to start out our semester.  The website we are using -Grammar Bytes- is completely free because of their mission to "Educate Everyone"!  Friday you will create a CourseSites account by following this link.  Here you will type in a bit of information.  Don't worry; it's free!  After setting up your account, you can click on "content" to find the quizzes which correspond to our study this week.

Today we jump back into the routine of reading responses.    For the rest of the quarter we will be reading a series of interesting essays and articles for your future blog posts.  Although I hope you continue to read books on your own, your future reading response blog posts will relate to the required articles posted.

 Please read the article carefully, and respond by creating a response post similar to those you have posted all year.  
  • Title your post "Article 1 Response."  You may add to this title if you wish.  (Two line title or colon...)
  • Make note of how you read the article and write about it.  What connections can you make with the text?  (What grammar challenges do you have, and what have you already mastered?)  Did you find yourself stopping...struggling for clarification? 
  • Summarize what you think the main points of the article are and  include your opinion or reaction. 
  • Include at least one or more quotes or passages from the article that you'd like to discuss.  You will be interpreting the passage or quote and including your reaction.  Tell why it was important and make connections and discuss further implications, inferences, and predictions.
  • Post a picture that illustrates your reaction or connections you make. 
  •  Before you hit "publish," be sure you check for punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and grammar!  We have a responsibility to our reading audience!  *If you want to go to the extra effort, hyperlink us to additional related information you find and explain what it means and how it relates.
Here is today's article about grammar, and it provides an interesting look at grammar rules and how they might apply to your own usage.  Read the article and respond in your own post, including your opinions.  Your response post will be due before our next class on Wednesday!

Wednesday, January 7, 2015

Finding Freedom!

Today's free writing topic, if you so choose, is about artist Sue Austin.  As a TED talks speaker, Sue Austin describes her journey to freedom, all while being confined to a wheelchair.  It's an amazing story of creativity and finding new perspective in the world.  As writers, we might think about what confines us, what our limitations are, and how we can make use of what we have.

We are continuing with Grammar Bytes, but today our assignment is to complete the first four activities in Exercise 2:  Fragments.

At the beginning of class Thursday, all of Exercise 1 is due.  We'll review answers and move on to fragments.  The first four activities or handouts for Exercise 2 are due at the beginning of class on Monday.  There's a quiz on Monday!  These first two exercises should give you the review you need to make an "A."

Saturday, January 3, 2015

Welcome 2015!

As I often do, I am wondering where my holiday went.  One thing I did accomplish, however, was using many of the suggestions you wrote in your end of the semester letters.  I'd like to share a few things I learned from your letters.

First, a number of you expressed a desire to review rules of punctuation and grammar.  You will notice there are new links on the right of our home page, and these will take us to a web site called Grammar Bytes.  There you will find interactive exercises which will review many of the writing challenges we all face.  We will start with punctuating a sentence, and though that seems a simple place to begin, it is indeed an area of concern:  sentence fragments and run-on or fused sentences.

The exercises games are fun, and you'll get credit for completing them by recording your scores on hand-outs to go with each.  Our class will complete an exercise link each period, and then we'll quiz over the material.  This means that our first day back, which is January 6th, we will begin with the five activities in exercise 1.  On Thursday we'll complete exercise 2, handouts 1-3, and on the following Monday there will be a quiz.  We will continue with grammar during the following weeks, but this will get us started.

Next,  I'd like to address the area of late work.  In many of the end-of -the-semester letters, students voiced a concern about distractions from students who come in unprepared, or distract us with off-task behavior, or don't participate.  There will be no more credit assigned for late work.  Period.  Unless you have an excused absence due to illness, there is no late work.  If you have a school related activity and have to miss class, hand in your paper ahead of time!

I thought it went without saying, but I'll say it again:  plagiarism will result in a score of a zero, and the work cannot be made up. 

On a lighter note, we will free write at the beginning of each class, which will give you a great jump start on your writer's notebook, which should be a college rule spiral or composition notebook.  Your first installment will be due on Friday, January 23rd.  Who knows?  If you really buckle down during class, you probably won't have as much to do outside of class toward your notebook!

Reading responses will come in the form of articles posted to our blog, which you can read and respond to.  They may not necessarily be due on Fridays.  We will read and post as we go.  The dates for responding will be the beginning of the next class unless otherwise noted.  Several of you commented about the difficulty to balance the writing projects we did along with the writer's notebook and the reading responses.  This should help.  I'll post an article, and you'll have some time to read during class and post your response.  If and when you don't have time to finish, it becomes homework to complete before the next class.

So there it is, my response to your concerns!   Let's have an awesome 2015.  My word for the year is "tranquility," or at least that's my goal.  I will get there by working ahead, finding some quiet time for contemplation, and sharing a peaceful classroom setting with self-directed, motivated, and engaged students dedicated to success.  Happy 2015!

Oh, yes, want to start off with a few extra points?  Before class on Tuesday, turn in a piece of paper with your name and "Grammar Bytes" on it for a bonus!